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Thursday, February 9, 2012

The Rhyme of Rhymes

Authors note: We had to use some words from the words that pooped into our heads after we read the word mystery so I made a long rhyme!



Pete was a very weak boy and every week he would go to the gym but the only muscle that he knew how to use were his feet and the heat would burn his feet. So instead he started to read a book about captain hook. Then he wanted to cook but he accidentally cooked his foot! So he then read a mystery book but he had to look and he had no eyes which made his week go by like a fly flying through the wind. So he cried because he relied on his mother and brother who were poor and his mother was always sore. He figured he was going to die so he said his goodbyes and lied to all his friends of where he would be so he would cry and thus he was going to die of sadness and madness. His dad was dead because he had been hit in the head by a bear that had no hair so he was a bare bear. Now back to the fly that flew but had no clue how to talk so he would fly and eventually die, like this paragraph and on my behalf I love this world so I hurled into the sky because I know how to fly because I am super-man and I can rhyme so here are my goodbyes I thank you for reading my book and there will never be a hook to my look because I am not captain hook!

1 comment:

  1. This is a very good rhyming paragraph, because it talks about a guy that cant speak and cant see. this piece also talks about how he loves the world and he can fly so he says his good byes.

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